All Comments on 'Staying at Aunt Cindy's'

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AnonymousAnonymousover 3 years ago
Not good....

....rushed and lacking all those major factors that result in a good story. Inadequate scene setting, no character building, no story, dire sex and a conclusion hat simply takes the breath away for brevity.

AnonymousAnonymousover 3 years ago
Lame

So lame

AnonymousAnonymousover 3 years ago

Yep, pretty fucking weak............

AnonymousAnonymousover 3 years ago
It was told 'matter-of-factly'

Why?

UltimateHomeBodyUltimateHomeBodyover 3 years ago

I'd be worried about the night she arrived with the carving knife. You never explained what happened to her boyfriend who suddenly disappeared.

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