All Comments on 'Steampunk Harlots Ch. 16'

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TJSkywindTJSkywindover 7 years ago
Awesome

So the new Fantastic Four are Emma, Leira, Easy, and Foxy, with Vile being a guest star. The first part of the breakout was nicely done. Once the slaves are free, though, there doesn't seem to be any place for them to live? Or do they have their own states or regions? They will no doubt want to find some place away from humans for a while. ...

Thank you for the tale thus far. 5*

jpz007ahrenjpz007ahrenover 7 years ago
Holy shit

And poor Emma. But god danm, does Vile have far too much magic. Those bullets they're shooting are huge to leave holes in people, so to melt them instantly, its more than terrififying

Lucka478Lucka478over 7 years ago
Keep it up

I stumbled upon this story 2 days ago and it ocupied a good chunk of my free time. One of the best stories here.

AnonymousAnonymousover 7 years ago
More Steampunk Harlots!!

Please continue the story. It is a hoot.

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All my submissions are being falsely flagged as AI generated so I have been unable to update anything. Nothing I do seems to fix the issue and even if I rewrote everything, I don't know what to change. Finally finished my first story! Steampunk Harlots weighs in at over 390...

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