All Comments on '[Step, by Step] A Visit by Stepsis'

Not worth checking back constantly for updates. If you can't bother to write and post the whole story, which would take two pages maximum, why should we bother to read it? It's not keeping people wondering what happens next.

I like the storie so far, but unless you post the following installments as seperate chapters I wont read them. I regularly scan the new stories section so I see most of what I am interested in, but checking on individual authors is too much hasle.

Great start looking forward to the updates.

Good start for your first story. Eager to see where this goes and some hot sexy time with stepsis.

Forget it, the "you" perspective is all but unreadable.

"This story is a work-in-progress; no separate chapters would be released,"

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Fuck that shit. This deserves an automatic rating of 1 without wasting the time to read it.

The stage is, sort of, players identified, and proposed plans laid on the table.

Daddy Bug Bucks and Richie Rich are about to become pawns.

Oh what webs you weave . . .

Nicely done, save for a couple of items Proof Reading should identify.

Posting subsequent 'chapters' will keep us following

Your note is a horrible idea. It's horrible for any submission, but particularly for such a low-rated, unliked story.

I suggest you take it down and just not bother submitting anymore. We'd all be better off.

Reading this was such a waste of time. I won't be following this story, or you.

I just could not get into this one / story. I gave it a 2 rating for the effort / attempt? Try and be more descriptive of events and bodies. Your readers want to her more about thick hard cocks and extremely hairy pussies being fucked. Keep at it. You will get there. Please loose the high school stuff and go a lot more with the adult hairy pussy and huge thick cock stuff. I promise, it will work for you. You might also consider changing your username. a few members have not liked it so far. Anyway, you can do this!!!! Write some hairy pussy - mom and sexy daughter lesbian incest stories. Mom and her thick cock son / son in law stories, and keep in mind that dad and daughter stories -- while they are good, they are not as popular as mom and son or son in law stories. But threesome with mom son-in -law and her work well if first time bi with anxious hesitation until both men are comfortable and trusting obviously knowing and hoping it will not be the only time it will ever happen. But all the hairy pussy (never shaved) mom's and (only mildly trimmed) sister stories are usually rated very high by your peers. Threesome with nephews and nieces are great too. The husband's sexy sister stories are also great. Mother-in-law (if she has a hairy pussy) (mother-in-law and daughter in law) stories work great as well. Never, ever, do shaved - razor burnt pus oozing pimples on her mount and cunt lip area stories. They absolutely suck and peer ratings reflect them every single time. Even super great very erotic stories become ruined by authors trying to allege a smooth pussy or a bare pussy that does nothing more than produce a mental image stubble growing out of pimples that leak out pus and, worse, blood if just re-shaved (nasty pimple heads just re-clipped) in her groin (shaved pussy is just dammed sickening and disgusting every time it is put on paper and said to be smooth) Again, you are off to a good start - A VERY GOOD START-. See where this story goes, or just take it down, and start over. IT SERIOUSLY TAKES A LOT OF COURAGE TO DO THIS KIND OF WRITING AND DO NOT BE DISCOURAGED. MY COMPLIMENTS, AND YOU --"CAN"' --- DO THIS! ----AND -- PLEASE, PLEASE ALWAYS, EVERY TIME, MAKE YOUR PUSSIES HAIRY / BUSH, AND DO NOT EVER write (please) about (NASTY) SHAVED CHAFFED stubbled over mounds with pimples that are "DOWN-RIGHT-NASTY to look at just- disgusting to look at! FULLY ENGORGED GLISTENING WET CUNT LIPS PROTRUDING FROM DAMP MOIST HAIRY BUSHES ARE ABSOLUTELY BEAUTIFUL, NO MATTER WHAT COLOR THE PUSSY HAIR IS - LIGHT TO DARK - and THICK PUSY HIAR IS WONDERFUL!

SEE WHAT I MEAN YOU MOUTH (just) WATERED AND YOU LIKED YOUR LIPS! ERECT CLITS THAT ARE OUT FROM UNDER THEIR HOODS LOOK GREAT SURROUNDED BY ABUNDANT HAIR!

KEEP WRITING PLEASE, DO IT, FOR ALL THE HAIRY PUSSY FANS OUT THERE. GO TO STORY TAGS AND READ ABOUT HAIRY PUSSIES, YOU WILL GET THE IDEA, LOTS OF GREAT TAGS TO REVIEW AND STUDY. ALSO, LOTS OF HARIY PUSSY STORIES SOMETIMES GO WITH HAIRY ARM PITS (YOU DO NOT HAVE TO DO THOSE- ITS A CHOICE) AND THOSE SEXY perfectly shaped FEET and manicured suck-able TOES SEEM TO WORK WELL WITH H AIRY PUSSIES- ESPECIALLY WHEN THE DAUGHTER IN LAW SUCKES THEM AS HER HUSBAND, MOM'S SON FUCKE HER). See, I just made you like your MOUTH WATER again didn't I. Go for it, GO RIGHT NOW AND get yourself totally necked and start writing, YES right now, sneak away from your friends / family WHOEVER IS THERE and do it, NOW WHILE YOU WRE HORNY! You could even pretend like they are watching you GET YOURSELF OFF, or OMG, let them watch YOU DO IT and help you with it. Don't EVER forget to taste yourself now and then as you write. You JUST liked your lips again, didn't you! YOU DO HAVE WHAT IT TAKES. DONT LET OTHERS PUT YOU DOWN ON YOUR FIRST STORY. IT ALWAYS GETS BETTER WITH TIME. THE FIRST FEW TIMES I EAT MY MOM'S PUSSY FOR HER, I AM SURE I WAS NOT THE EXPERT AT IT I AM TODAY, EVEN THOUGH I TRIED VERY HARD. KEEP WRITTING, IT WILL GET BETTER.

Without separating the additions, possibly as chapters, will cost you readers.

I, for one, don't feel alone on saying that I don't want to search through looking for the start of an addition.

It sounds like the beginning of a great story. I would love to be kept up to date on the rest of the story.