by BellaMia319
I like just the right amount of detail and transition from scene to scene. Great storyteller.
I can identify with this story as it really happened to me too. My step daughter,however,was a milky white redhead. Yes large breast and a sizzleing attitude. The sex was fantastic! Keep writing and I'll keep reading.
This needs a continuance, with the white stepdaddy making a mommy out of his stepdaughter so their baby can have chocolate milk....
I can't wait for your next submission!...Hopefully it will be one that stems from the wild times we have had together!...
To divide the OVERSIZED and the normal characters.
It is so boring. You guys with your oversized dicky fetish and your oversize boob fetish.
If you want to excite a REAL girl give yor guy anoversized tongue.
Donna
Well written Ms. Lady. A wonderful first story. I know we will be hearing more from you right! MUAH!!!
Great Job!!!!
How about some additional sessons between these two and also include mother.
What an incredibly hot story... Well written technically, with good use of plot and vocabulary, no dumb-ass typos or confusion of ?your" and "you're"... but besides all that?
Wow... great descriptions of the characters and the "attitude" each of them have. The action is down and dirty, and the dialogue is smokin' hot and adds to the nastiness of it all. And ya gotta love an agressive girl like that! (at least we guys do!)
I am running out of superlatives, so I will just say "kudos", and hope we can see more from you, either chapter two of this little jewel or something else equally creative.
?Please??