All Comments on 'Step-daddy's Princess'

please get someone to edit the small mistakes.

You need to find someone to edit your story.

I only have 1 thing to say, he's one lucky daddy!

Jenna needs to continue fucking daddy and bear him several children.

Please work on grammar including word choice. This could have been a 5 but as it stands it's a generous 3.

Hi guys! It's the writer here! Thank you so much for commenting and thank you for such wonderful advises. Yes I'm looking for an editor so the next part will be published as soon as I find a good Editor.

Liked it Lola and sent you a note. today 4-21-23 from CaryGrant_69

Great! Continue like that. I'm waiting for the next chapter(s)