All Comments on 'Step Daughter Antics'

Please learn the English language.

Whatever translation program you’ve used, go back and start over. Your writing is so Disorganized and idiotic I didn’t finish the first page. I’m only leaving this review as a courtesy to you to improve your writing and editing skills. This is wholly unreadable.

after the first couple of pages. No character, no dialogue, no plot, nothing but fucking. The first times were "educational," at least if you fantasize about sluts: but after that every fuck sounded alike. In short, this story is OK, I guess, for a wank-fest but absolutely a waste of time for any other purpose.

Please, please don't write any more.

I am not sure if English is your native language but it is clear in your writing that it is not your strong suit. I think you have the potential for a great story. However, you need to fix your grammar, spelling errors, and have someone else read it for continuity errors. I didn't make it past the first page before giving up.