All Comments on 'Step Mom'

Story would have been really hot if I didnt have to figure out what words were meant to be used. I'm not a grammar Nazi, but please remember which character is which. Giving you 3 stars because it has promise if you can clean it up.

Good idea but too hard to read.

Thank you for your Feedbacks. I surely will work on it and will try to deliver better next time.

Thank you for the feedback . My apologies for the mistakes, I will try and do better next time. Will take care of Grammar and speech.

Very nice story but no incest. Stepmother is not incest. No blood relationship at all

Sorry, I made the mistake and didn't notice. Will improve and be careful next time.

Can tell English is not your 1st language. It would have been an enjoyable read had i been able to actually understand any of it.

@dila882 I'm really sorry for spoiling the read. I am submitting an edited version.

The category is 'Incest/Taboo', not 'Incest'. In most societies it is considered taboo (prohibited or restricted by social custom) to have sex with your father's wife, so there's no problem with placing it in this category

Holy fucking grammar fail I couldn't read this sh8t.

Yes. I accept the mistakes. I was careless and didn't check. I have EDITED and resubmitted This. Hope it comes up soon.

Good story. Ignore the retards critiquing your grammar. They probably would do worse if they had the ingenuity and courage to actually create rather than criticise. Get someone to help you edit - hopfully there will be a next time

Thank you so much. Yes, getting editing help next time .

Nice short story.

Getting myself revving up on this.

I'm confused as to why the father was waiting for the mother to die only to marry another woman who can't have children?

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