Step Sis is My Roommate

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Joe moves in with his hot step sis Sara.
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lucifer6
lucifer6
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Hi guys, this is my first time writing a story, so please comment down for any mistakes and suggestions on how the story should progress or if I should completely stop this. slow, with small progress every episode.

A Work of Fiction

Hi, my name is Joe. I am 20 years old and studying architecture at university.

I used to live in a college dorm until I got into a fight and got kicked out of the dorm. I had no place to live, so I decided to move in with my step-sister who was living in the same city.

But I didn't know that it was going to be the best decision of my life.

I got out of the cab and went to her apartment. It was a nice apartment. I didn't know she made big bucks.

I rang the bell.

But first, I'd like to introduce you to Sara, my step sister.

My father remarried Stella, my stepmother, with whom I had a good relationship.

Sara was 7 then, but we didn't have a very good relationship, but it was fine.

When she invited me to stay with her, I was surprised because I hadn't had any contact with her for over a year.

But, I suppose, it was fate.

I rang the bell and didn't get any response. I rang again a few minutes later, still no response, so I decided to try the door.

I looked through the peephole and I saw her topless putting on a t-shirt. I couldn't stop looking. It was the most perfect breast I have ever seen and

I have seen a lot of them. She came to the door. I quickly pulled back and stood as if I had seen nothing.

She opened the door. She was wearing a green t-shirt and shorts.

Oh, um... I couldn't say anything because I had just seen her BOOBS.

Sara: "Oh hey, didn't think you would come this early. Well, don't just stand there, come in. "

I went inside and sat on the couch, and she asked me a question.

Sara: "So, why did you get kicked out?"

"I had a fight with the dean's son, and they decided to let me stay in college but kicked me out of the dorm."

"Why did you fight that boy?"

"Well, I was dating this girl, Judy, and she cheated on me with him. I took it maturely, but he started saying shits about me, so I beat the crap out of him."

Sara said, "Well, you can stay here until you find a better place."

Joe: "Yeah, thank you so much for doing that...

Before I could continue Sara interpreted me.

Sara Yeah, I didn't want you to stay with me, but my mom kind of forced me by saying, "Families stick together," and shit.

Joe: "Look, I can go if you don't want me here."

Sara "Ugh, no mom will be mad about it."

Joe "I can talk to her"

"NO, it's okay, I kinda like you now," Sara says.

For all this conversation, I was having a hard time making eye contact. All I could think was her boobs.

Sara says, "There are two bedrooms; you can use either one, but only one bathroom, so you might have to wait."

Joe "Sure"

Sara: "Ok, then make yourself at home."

Joe "cool"

*midnight*

I heard the door crack open in my room.

When I opened my eyes, Sara was standing in the doorway.

"Do you need anything?"

She had no response.

I asked again, but this time she walked to my bed and lay next to me.

Then it hit me that she used to sleepwalk when she was a kid.

She got close to me and started to cuddle. Her breast was pressing against my back.

She smelled like roses. It was so good.

Then I felt her hand slowly creeping towards my dick. I was shocked but also excited.

Her hand stayed there for a few minutes. I was hard, so I wipped it out and slowly put her hand on my dick.

She gripped it and gave a few strokes. Her hands were so soft and cold, but just before I could come, she pulled her hand.

I was so fucking close I couldn't sleep like that, so I turned to her side and started stroking my dick.

I placed my hand on her thighs. It was soft as a feather. I slowly moved my hand up. I could feel her pussy over her shorts. It was hot.I rubbed it a few times. She let out a small moan. Then I moved my hand to her ass. Oh, I was so round and juicy. I pressed it a few times, not hard but softly. I couldn't hold it anymore. I came on her thigh. A few seconds later, I regained my senses.

What the fuck have I done?

I panicked and quickly cleaned her thighs and went to sleep.

I woke up the next morning hearing Sara scream.

Sara: "WHAT THE FUCK!"

to be continued

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TW9278TW9278about 2 months ago

Dude you did fine, just make sure you finish the story.

juanviejojuanviejoabout 1 year ago

GET AN EDITOR NOW!

HDblackheartHDblackheartalmost 2 years ago

Okay this was rough I gave you 4 because you need to proof read and better edit your work other than those two things this story lacks length and is ultimately why I cut this 5 stars... A good story needs build up and this one kinda lacks that don't be afraid to spend a page or two explaining the motivations of each person involved along side setting up a good story.... Note a good story has more than one page.... A single page story is not a story at all to me but and article now its possible to build a really hot and steamy article by quickly explaining character motivations during passionate hot sex

AnonymousAnonymousalmost 2 years ago

I want to be constructive, but the best I can manage is to say that you appear not to be a native English speaker, and if that's the case your English is really good and the meaning comes across, but you could use a native language proofreader to avoid awkward phrasing that no native Anglophone would use if they were old enough to be writing (or reading) this kind of story.

This may be a matter of personal taste, but I massively dislike "script style", e.g.

Sara: "I am Sara and I am saying this."

Joe: "Thank you Sara, I am Joe and this is my response."

Sara said, Joe said. It's very simple. A lot of people get self conscious about the fact they've used "said" 25 times on one page, but no one other than the author will even notice it because they're used to seeing it. They WILL notice if you try to avoid doing it, and it makes your writing look weird.

A few examples:

"He said some shits about me." ... in the phrase "he said some shit", no matter how many times he did it, "shit" is never pluralized, it's treated as a collective noun.

"Why did you fight that boy?" ... it's not actually WRONG, it just changes the meaning of the question from "why did you get in a fight" to "of course you got in a fight, because that's what people do, but why with him in particular?" If that's what you meant (as in, if you're going to fight someone at college, the Dean's son is probably pretty low on the list of good choices) then "Why did you fight the Dean's son, of all people?" sounds more natural, and if not then "Why did you get in a fight?" or "What were you fighting about?" come across better.

AnonymousAnonymousalmost 2 years ago

"Before I could continue Sara interpreted me."

She interpreted you???

You need to develop a story, Spend some time, maybe three quarters in Creative Writing 101-2-3. A string of one-liners does not make a story.

Never never never end a tale with "to be continued". You may not come back so you must write to finish your tale

Minus two stars.

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