All Comments on 'Stephanie's Revenge'

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Miss JaneMiss Janeover 18 years ago
Wish I had that kind of luck...

Sure wish I had been lucky enough to be in this scenario when I was younger...to be taken advantage of by a trio of hunky American servicemen...Ooooh, a fantasy cum true! Loved the story!

AnonymousAnonymousabout 14 years ago
So may errors

This might have been a five, but there were so many errors and missing words that it pulled me out of it, fix the missing words and horrible misleading grammar!

andy1hardyandy1hardyalmost 14 years ago
An Excellent Twist Missed!!!!

At this part you should have continued with a twist to read:

"Time to take those sexy schoolgirl panties off," and he grasped the waistband while she obediently lifted her bottom so that he could slip them off.

"And they're not "schoolgirl panties," she scolded him, smiling. "My husband brought them back from Paris for me.

My Add On:

"and if you must know they're pink with lace trimming!' "Omigod!!!! upon realizing that her husband's secretary picked out her panties and that he was not having an affair. But it was too late as the three blokes ravaged her pussy for the next two hours."

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