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All Comments on 'Stepsister's Place Ch. 03'

by Ravenblackerotica

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Frankie1952Frankie195211 months ago

I do hope she is okay and John can rescue her. Seems they might need to move further away. I do hope they are always together. Great writing. More please.

Ilovetophoto68Ilovetophoto6811 months ago

Please keep writing this story

MikeOrMikeyMikeOrMikey11 months ago

Wow. Great chapter. 5 Stars. I can't wait for the next one.

muskyboymuskyboy11 months ago

Marie at the gentlemen's club will really destroy the great romance in this story.

AnonymousAnonymous11 months ago

Hope he planted a baby in her.

Campus77Campus7711 months ago

You have to continue this story. I'm tied in knots wanting to know what happens to this loving couple!

tomar82403tomar8240311 months ago
Warp Factor Eight!

The speed of the non-sexual major events is incredibly quick. You can stand to slow it down and develop some character, characters, and background. While I still gave you a five - at least consider slowing it down a tad.

live4thebjlive4thebj10 months ago

I loved it and hooked. Next chapter please. ****

AnonymousAnonymous10 months ago

Story is so good.... continue with chapter 4??

Anonymous91Anonymous9110 months ago

No Step Fathers involvement in sex please

245624569 months ago

Would love to see another chapter. It's getting better and better.

RicubRicub6 months ago

Good story enjoyed reading it .Hoping for another chapter please.

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Hey guys, I enjoy writing sexual things and publishing them. Come and see... I'd love to hearing feedback on my stories. Let me know what you think! You can check out more of my work here www.linktr.ee/ravenblackbooks