All Comments on 'Steve and Lauren Ch. 01'

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woodcarverII over 18 years ago

Hot Hot Hot

This is exactly what I would love to experience! Thanks for the story and I'm adding it to the ever growing pile of favs!

kayte over 18 years ago

Nice and hot sweetie

So glad see your story where everyone can enjoy it!!

Hope to see you writing more!!!!!

Erotica_Writings over 18 years ago

mmmmmmmmmm nipple erections for sure

Very hot and makes thongs wet

TennesseeMe over 18 years ago

Kept me tied to my seat reading.

kept my hands busy while reading.

BillyBobJoeEd over 18 years ago

Give us more!

Great and very hot start to a series! keep the story going!

techsan over 18 years ago

Hot start and ideas galore!

Damn, 69, good story! I'm not really bi so I don't particularly care for the MM portion but I can understand why others would. I really liked your descriptions of activities between Steve & Lauren and look forward to more chapters on their adventures. Looks like you've left room in your outline for many really HOT tales (or is that "tails"?)

GoddessOfSouls over 18 years ago

HOT!! *pant*

well done!! Knowing you and your story, I can only say that you do have a gift for making another understand your lust. I'am pleased to see you writing again.