by opels
That was a great scene; you write extremely well. I notice your submissions stopped in '07...if you still monitor your stories, here's a vote for you to write more, of anything; but especially this story!
Since my name is Steve,
This story is pretty much how the best birthday I could imagine might work out. Well done!
I wish my birthday had gone as well as Steve's!! Please let us know how the rest of the say went.
This is an excellent story Opels! I Love all of your works.. Keep writing! Is there more? What Happens Next?