All Comments on 'Steve's First Adventure Pt. 02'

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liz33ndliz33ndover 4 years ago
it is going wrong for me

I still like your story skills, and the way you put it all on paper. four stars and a big hell yeah. good job.

AnonymousAnonymousover 4 years ago
HOT HOT HOT

There's only one thing wrong with Steve's ... wish it was me that it was happing to ,, dream so much I can fine a Daddy ... great story can't wait to read more

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