All Comments on 'Stiff Competition'

by JordonLynn

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AnonymousAnonymousover 18 years ago
Why Bother - Infidelity at Either End

is cuckolding - lawyer or not! Wear is yo brain!

JordonLynnJordonLynnover 18 years agoAuthor
Anonymous strikes again!

You're going to slap me, at least do it with some style.

Infidelity at Either End... is still cockolding. See, now this is done with a little sarcastic flair, and -lawyer or not! was overkill.

And, it should be where (not wear) you illiterate buffoon.

Also, my 5 cancels out your 00, so I'm back to even.

Love, Luck and Lust JL

AnonymousAnonymousover 18 years ago
Nice teaser - waiting for your next effort

Ignore the dimwits - it's just a story. Keep up the good work, I enjoy your writing tremendously. Anxiously awaiting any and all further efforts.

AnonymousAnonymousover 18 years ago
Wrong word

You misused the word "niggardly". It's an Old English word meaning cheap. The N-word is a demeaning form of negro which is the spanish word for black.

AnonymousAnonymousover 18 years ago
nice

nice

AnonymousAnonymousover 15 years ago
I just have to ask

Why does a woman who says in her bio that family is one of the most important things to her and that she is married seem to write exclusively about weak willed women who destroy their marriages or betray the men who love them? I realize that its just fantasy, hell I hate adultery but here I am whacking off to a story about it even though I know its wrong. I just wondered why you focus on it so much.

AnonymousAnonymousover 11 years ago
I don't know what's worse

The preaching at the beginning or the shitty story. Both are an epic fail.

hunghandsumhunghandsumover 9 years ago
Stiff Competition sequels

Certainly hope this story expands into more. Great story.

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