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by Shopgirl21

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KOTKKOTKalmost 15 years ago
Beautiful story, BUT....

Very sad story. Your interpretation was very strong. I must say -- A new bright author is born on Literotica & we need more like you. I'm looking forward to read more from you. Thank you for the beautiful story.

AnonymousAnonymousalmost 15 years ago
Beautiful

and sad. Very brilliantly written... it was however in need of editing. You're very very good with a wonderful writing style.

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