All Comments on 'Still Waters Ch. 03'

hmm the only explanation I can think of think of off the top of my head is her wolf is simply not ready to leave her pack because of her mother. or perhaps his wolf is not ready to joins her pack for the same reason.

Maybe the fates are creating a new pack with Bertha as the matriarch, with Deacon and Declan as the alphas. Just a thought.

This is an unusual predicament. I figured they'd belong to Gaines automatically. Maybe a new pack will form. That way we'll have more new and exciting characters. I eagerly await the next chapter.

Good writing, yet needs more attention to checking the spelling and capitalization. It takes away from the story when these things are not correct. Keep writing.

You give such depth and personality to your characters. I love that they are all rallying around their mother and she is responding positively to them. Even in the depths of thier pain and loss, they are bonding and healing.

Thank you for sharing! 😊 I can't wait for the next chapter.

DJ