All Comments on 'Stockholm'

I do like your darker stories very much Smokey. I noticed that Linny was named throughout but in the nightmare section and the other character was named only as the visitor, this added to the atmosphere and characterisation greatly. We found out who the visitor was towards the ending which was a nice reveal

The twist at the end was a great idea, I didn't see that coming. A great way of giving your story a happy ending and you got tickling in as well so I'm one happy reader.

Thank you Smokey 5 more stars and a favourite for you

Jc

Hallo Smokey!

Wow... well written hot and sexy as always, it's brilliant!... Smokey, you really got me this time, with that tricky little twist at the end, I did not see it coming!...

Thank-you, for sharing another of your brilliantly written stories with us. ... Another 5-Stars and 6-Tricky 😜 Orgasms,,, yes!

Your kinky dyke friends,

Gay Kat and Queen Jackie..