by Limnophile
Apologies for the brevity and lack of polish. I've had sort of a burst of creativity lately, so I'm switching back and forth as I write several stories almost simultaneously. I think I've published around 20 in the last month. I'll upload a much longer revised version in a few days/weeks/months. Please consider this a teaser for later.
That is a great start but incredibly frustrating where you stopped! I get it but I still hate these damn cliffhangers. Excellent job so far.