by lamoureuse
You created such thick erotic tension between the two lovers.
I look forward hungrily for the next chapter.
Love your writing style in both stories posted so far! Your description of the situations and the characters involved have just the right amount of detail, but not to much to bore me. Also very sensual and erotic, like watching a great movie. I can't wait to read more!!
Your writing is so fine and arousing, that the few tiny flaws were almost unnoticeable. I look forward to your progress.
seeing you have a new story (september 12, 2021) i went back to read this one, which i think is your first. excellent! good luck to you.