All Comments on 'Stood Up Ch. 01'

I feel a three way coming on, Moore please!

Spoiled by the condoms

Maybe he can fuck the roommate too. A threesome would be fantastic

Great story,. Short, erotic ones like this seem rare today. I think a threesome would ruin the story. This is rightly an a Erotic Coupling, not Group Sex. People ask for sequels way too often. This story is perfect, and i think anymore would devalue what you’ve written. This is proper literotica, not a fuck story. I eagerly await your next story.

Agree with markjakob

Really well done. Sweet, funny and hot, all rolled into one. I loved how you described the awkwardness of a first date, that we've all had to live through. The sex was steamy too, and really well described.

You write so well, I'm looking forward to reading more from you!