All Comments on 'Stories For Chris Ch. 02'

by Melissa000

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AnonymousAnonymousover 19 years ago
hot

I like how your stories have unexpected twists to them. I hope you will write more.

sacksackover 19 years ago
always hot....

but I think it would read better if it were written in the past tense...otherwise, the lead up is good and the actual sex is naughty/forbidden. Keep on writing!!

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