All Comments on 'Story of a Pet'

And welcome to Literotica, Winidou. It is good to have a new writer with us and I enjoyed your début story. The only advice I can offer you is, now you have started, to keep writing -- every day if you can.

No-one, not even Stephen King or Neil Gaiman knows everything about writing; you must find your own voice and your own way. That is more than many of us could hope for.

Well done -- four stars.

The only complaint I have is I want to read more! Please keep the story going!!!

Well done this. I cannot wait for the next installment.

Fabulous first story!! I am going to need more though.

Thats really good

Pulled me in instantly

Please make a part two

That was so good!!! Wish that would happen to me 😍 hoping there’s a part 2!

I hope you intend to add to it! It's wonderfu!!!

More of this story please