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Click hereHe did me twice in pretty short order—and yes, he went into my butt, just the way you did. I guess he likes that.
Um, Jimmy, what are you doing? Put that thing back into your pants! What's that? You wanna go into my pussy? Oh, all right, hold your horses, lemme take my panties off. But I'm keeping my dress on, bro!
It would be nice to have an incest story without anal. Obviously a favorite of yours
I hope there's another episode where they all get together in one bed,
I did enjoy this story
This wasn't sexy at all, just funny as hell. Got to love a nonsensical story for its sheer entertainment value. I hope you wrote this with tongue in cheek.
Perhaps if they had used the flare that was in the boat for just such emergencies, they would have been saved earlier.
Not sure how many phones, even smart phones, would work after being dunked in sea water.
In terms of smut, it's got it all and the sex is fairly well written from the point of view of the narrator. But the problem is that it's just ridiculous. If he's a virgin this long, chances are that he would have been far too nervous to just make a quick move on his mom. And then it seemed like you were just checking off boxes. Dick-in-pussy? Check. Anal? Check. 69? Check? Random anal sex with the sister? Check. Even more random Dad fucks all of the sister's holes? Check, check, and check.
It's okay to take a moment and let a story breathe. It doesn't have to be a porn movie that goes from one scene to the next. You are a good writer. Let the story build.
First sex doable. Then anal and 69 after that. Please. Then the sister and brother. Not to mention the father. *