All Comments on 'Stranded Ch. 17'

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AnonymousAnonymousover 3 years ago

This is a sick, sick world.

MasterfuljimMasterfuljimover 3 years ago
Wow the surprises keep coming.

Have I said that ......

HeyjessHeyjessover 3 years ago
god I’ve missed you!

What an ending though omg! please hurry

jadewinchesterjadewinchesterover 3 years agoAuthor
Indeed

@anonymous Yes, Yes it is. And I love it. That is why I put a disclaimer, yet you read on. πŸ€”πŸ§

@Masterfuljim you have. But I'm told I'm full of em. πŸ˜‡

AnonymousAnonymousover 3 years ago
An end in sight?

The atmosphere and people you have populated it with are horrible. I don't like that there is no growth of anyone's characters (except to be even more self righteously depraved) and no real story progression. We've seen KitKat go through ordeal after ordeal with nothing to show for it. But Sam is still hot.

jadewinchesterjadewinchesterover 3 years agoAuthor
Hmm

@Heyjess-- I have a good chunk of the next chapter already written!!I hope to not take so long on this one. Got a job so less freetime.

@anonymous

I welcome feedback, i hope to only grow better as a writer and am always open to suggestions. Though cant promise I'll take it. I like that they become more depraved. Guess that's what happens when I write for fun. But you have given me something to chew on. Feel free to send me an email if you have constructive criticism or suggestions. --anyone can really.

AnonymousAnonymousover 3 years ago
:(

Poor kitkat... Is she ever going to actually enjoy Sam's softer side?

MissedLifeMissedLifeover 3 years ago

EXCELLENT! Well worth the wait. Love this series and this surprise was a great twist. Can not wait for the next chapter.

jadewinchesterjadewinchesterover 3 years agoAuthor
You guys rock

@MissedLife-- so glad you liked it! 😊 I am working hard on next one

@anon#3

Softer side, guess you'll have to keep reading to find out πŸ˜πŸ˜‡

AnonymousAnonymousover 3 years ago

I certainly hope this ends with a raid by the government on this entire community, and the whole lot of the men jailed for their abuses.

AnonymousAnonymousover 3 years ago
Sooooo good

You always leave me dying for more. Love it

HarleyKilledtheJokerHarleyKilledtheJokerover 3 years ago
Never see it coming

You sure do have a gift with plot twists! Love it!!!

AnonymousAnonymousover 3 years ago

I love this series, I think that you could add a little bit more in the aftercare though. Where did Hank go?

AnonymousAnonymousabout 3 years ago
when is our favorite psychopath back?

I’m seriously craving more.

AnonymousAnonymousabout 3 years ago

Will the next chapter be posted soon?

AnonymousAnonymousabout 3 years ago

Any update in the near future? I re-read your stories all the time by the way. You are truly gifted. Why do I find myself falling for Sam/Arioch? Cause you're good! Keep it up!

jadewinchesterjadewinchesterabout 3 years agoAuthor

I am the worst, I hate that its taking me so long. I'm working hard. It's my main goal when I get few min free time

AnonymousAnonymousabout 3 years ago

Any updates in the works?

AnonymousAnonymousabout 3 years ago

New chapter?

jadewinchesterjadewinchesteralmost 3 years agoAuthor

I'm sorry. I'm still working on it. My goals is end of month at latest.

It warms my heart that you want more!

AnonymousAnonymousalmost 3 years ago

At the risk of being a very needy whiny reader, may I once again ask for an update? 😬 I just miss Arioch SO MUCH

jadewinchesterjadewinchesteralmost 3 years agoAuthor

Well. In your defense its been like 6months. And I wish I was done. Lot of overtime at work lately. I will work hard on it this weekend and hope in the next week or two have it ready. πŸ’œ

AnonymousAnonymousalmost 3 years ago

Is there any hope for a chapter? Or a finale? Closure?! Very desperate fans want more and feel ignored and sad.

AnonymousAnonymousalmost 3 years ago

Any update? Dying for more lol

jadewinchesterjadewinchesteralmost 3 years agoAuthor

Sorry. This has not been forgotten I swear just super busy. Work takes up most my time now

AnonymousAnonymousover 2 years ago

You're so talented! Keep up your amazing gift! You know you're good when people beg for more!

Life is busy though. It makes sense it's taken a while, but is there a projected time frame for a new chapter?

AnonymousAnonymousover 2 years ago

I hope everything is going ok for you. It's been such a long time!

jadewinchesterjadewinchesterover 2 years agoAuthor

I'm a bit stuck to be honest. But I'm making headway. I have cpl vacation days, coming next week and hope to spend some time then. Sorry everyone. I know how much it sucks waiting for what happens next.

AnonymousAnonymousover 2 years ago

I would love to see Kat and Sam/Arioch escape and just live happily in a mountain cabin. I imagine Eliza will kill her ex and her friend because that's how she is. But Sam/Arioch and Kat could be happily on their own advice. Or he does giving her the only thing he can, her freedom.

AnonymousAnonymousover 2 years ago

The. Best. Story. Ever! You are an extremely talented writer. Thank you for this amazing story.

Waiting impatiently for an update 😁

AnonymousAnonymousover 2 years ago

You're writing is captivating! I'm a little bit obsessed.

AnonymousAnonymousover 2 years ago

Hey hey are you okay?

jadewinchesterjadewinchesterover 2 years agoAuthor

I'm alive. Up to 15 pages so far. My GOAL is by Thanksgiving πŸ¦ƒI am honored you stick with me this long. This block hit me hard.

AnonymousAnonymousover 2 years ago

Thanksgiving has come and gone. I hope it means it will be uploaded soon. I hope you're doing well.

AnonymousAnonymousover 2 years ago

Psssst

AnonymousAnonymousover 2 years ago

I'm so sad we don't have an update still. It's been going on a year.

AnonymousAnonymousover 2 years ago

Are you doing okay? I hope all is good.

AnonymousAnonymousover 2 years ago

OMFGGGG your writing is absolutelt amazing . Wow Arioch and Sam and now the new people she’s going to have to break in- my goodness. I’m scared but also can’t wait for the next chapter! Please post soon!

AnonymousAnonymousover 2 years ago

Love this story and still eagerly await a new chapter <3

jadewinchesterjadewinchesterover 2 years agoAuthor

😭😭😭I'm sorry. I promise I am trying. Depressions a bitch, and not even the cool kind

AnonymousAnonymousover 2 years ago

Hi jade just saw your note on being depressed. So happy you are still here, as much as we want a new story take your time and take care of yourself. We will still be here when you are feeling up to it ❀️❀️.

ThejadedoneThejadedoneover 2 years ago

Hi,

Love love love this story. Devastated I've reached the temporary end. It's SO GOOD.

Also for bad depression get in the shower and at the end turn on the cold water (as cold as you can bare it) let it wash over your face and head a few times (only has to be for a few milliseconds, longer the better) it's will make you gasp known as the divers breath and it is physchologocially proven in most cases to pull you out of depression temporarily. Effects can last upwards of 3 hours. Hope this helps, worth a try at least.

AnonymousAnonymousabout 2 years ago

I am the anon who commented previously who didn't like the violence but liked the story and characters enough to hang around and wait for your updates. I'm saddened by your comment regarding depression. I have suffered bouts of if in the past, and an episode recently too. The despair and helplessness felt can be overwhelming. I hope you are getting the help and support to ride through it.

P.S. still waiting for you to get better and see what fresh hell awaits Kat. I wish she can gun down all those who have wronged her. I do dislike violence but I'm also vengeful.

AnonymousAnonymousalmost 2 years ago

This is the best story in this website. I can't wait for KitKat to get pregnant, too!

AnonymousAnonymousalmost 2 years ago

Dear Jade, I am sorry you're fighting depression, but I am glad to hear from you. I had worried perhaps covid had claimed you. I'm a long time fan and I can wait as long as it takes for an update. I hope there will be a new chapter some day. I love KitKat and Sam so very much. They warm my heart.

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