by Fran_cd
Lovely story so far. The only complaint I have, which is very minor, the point of view changes quite a bit. Sarah's, to Doug's, to third person. Its a bit jerky when it happens, especially when third person narrates
The door is open for the next sexy chapter.
Please continue opening the eyes to the transgender life style.
I'm lovin' the slow burn. The conversations are realistic and adult, and I love the humor of the characters. Can't wait for the next chapter!