Mixing up your characters a bit. Todger missed two. Jen became Ron's wife once and James fucked Bills ass not Ron. Good story though but Will didn't get to fuck Jen
You will find that nearly all, but not all, of my stories have a common denominator. I want my characters to be joyful in life. I want them to be happy. If stretching sexual boundaries does that for them, it is fine with me. It's just sex, after all.