All Comments on 'Strange Attractors Pt. 01'

Loved the writing style. I look forward to the next installment.

69 isn't cunnilingus? Your lesbian heroine seems to be more than a little hung up on cock. Are you sure this story couldn't be about a guy? Donatello would be happy.

OK the 69 comment belonged elsewhere. Never the less I was confused is this a daily commute at 2hours each way? Was this a morning train or evening. There is a paragraph that makes no sense of the time.

Nearly 360 degrees of hills fell away on all sides in great rolling carpets of dark green, from the far horizon to right up under her nose. Above her, the first whispers of dawn had blended a cool patina of lapis into the darker blues of midnight, signaling a last hurrah for the young and sexy before the night carried their dirty secrets away off the western edge of the world.

So I think damn early in the morning, but really a Johnny Walker Blue on the way to work? And very public sex on a train? Yes, this is fantasy but really dude, this one just does not do it.