Strange Attractors Pt. 01

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The screen came to life: [Good to finally meet you. Had a feeling we'd hit it off. {winky face emoji} Feel free to hang on to our mutual "friend". Just don't be late for work. Big first day ahead. - Syd]

The phone dropped to the ground, bouncing away among the purse rubble still scattered there. The rising sun was well on its way now, highlighting a charming Art Deco theme that underpinned the view allowed by the hundreds of square feet of plexisteel glass around her - by daylight, still easily the most amazing view for a hundred miles in any direction.

Maggie noticed none of it. She remained seated half-nude on the floor as the countryside slowly gave way to townships and homes, sidewalks and suburbs, the Magnus making its steady way west.

End Part One

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metroalmametroalmaover 3 years ago

OK the 69 comment belonged elsewhere. Never the less I was confused is this a daily commute at 2hours each way? Was this a morning train or evening. There is a paragraph that makes no sense of the time.

Nearly 360 degrees of hills fell away on all sides in great rolling carpets of dark green, from the far horizon to right up under her nose. Above her, the first whispers of dawn had blended a cool patina of lapis into the darker blues of midnight, signaling a last hurrah for the young and sexy before the night carried their dirty secrets away off the western edge of the world.

So I think damn early in the morning, but really a Johnny Walker Blue on the way to work? And very public sex on a train? Yes, this is fantasy but really dude, this one just does not do it.

AnonymousAnonymousover 3 years ago

69 isn't cunnilingus? Your lesbian heroine seems to be more than a little hung up on cock. Are you sure this story couldn't be about a guy? Donatello would be happy.

domfundomfunover 3 years ago

Loved the writing style. I look forward to the next installment.

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