by Antiproton
Honestly I'm liking this even more than a Dragons tale and I really like that.
You've got.e hooked and so far deep into this story, waiting impatiently to see how our heroes can save the kingdom from some lousy kings.
While I like ADT, I have surprisingly found myself more emotionally invested in this tale. I believe this story could be built upon to run parallel to and also intertwining a little with ADT. Not so much as the stories become dependent on each other. i'm sorry but 5 chapters doesn't seem to do this cast of characters justice. Just seems to leave a lot on the table or meat left on the bone if you will. I'll see how I feel after the last chapter. I have a feeling I will be left wanting morefrom this cast of characters. As always, your talent and wonderful writing are much appreciated.
This is fantastic! Eagerly awaiting the final chapter, I love these characters. Also, while I love ADT it's refreshing to read a more grounded Ten Kingdoms story without the "parallel worlds" aspect.
Loving this, another ⭐️⭐️⭐️⭐️⭐️ 5 stars as usual. So glad Shara finally told Lucien the truth. I have a nasty suspicion Tyso may know ‘Katia’ isn’t who she really is. The lecherous libertine wants both of Lucien’s wives and the queen. Thank you for sharing your talents with us.
Actual cliff hangers are quite frustrating but this kind makes for enjoyable storytelling. 5 stars
(As a side note, two women kissing in front of severely under sexed men would have caused a complete uproar, even among disciplined men.)
oh please can someone just give Shara to Tyso? Because she can't talk, can't speak, can't do anything and don't know what to say or do. She is an sub and Ryso will know how to handle stupid sluts like her. Also Kalus should just je honest and should excuse himself for stupid judging his King for enjoying live and thank Tyso for giving him two women. He should submit to have great fun with his second wife. All that stupid drama gets fucking annoying