All Comments on 'Strangers in the Night'

by CocoaCali

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AnonymousAnonymousover 17 years ago
Good story

I hope that you are planning to write more stories.

AnonymousAnonymousover 17 years ago
ditto: Your characterization and dialogue flow

like single-malt; more and soon please.

AnonymousAnonymousover 17 years ago
great first story

a hot little yarn

njgreeknjgreekover 17 years ago
Awesome story

That was a hot hot story, I enjoyed it immensely!!!! Can I Be Cameron? Have fun this weekend. Perhaps write a story about it? Hmmm.....

AnonymousAnonymousabout 17 years ago
mmmmmmm

you made me so fucking hot!!! I loved it. wish it was me with you!!

AnonymousAnonymousalmost 17 years ago
GREAT!

Hot and Sexy!

SecretFantasy69SecretFantasy69almost 17 years ago
Very Nice!

Thank you for a great read!

alphataalphataover 16 years ago
Good one!

Good story, nice build-up, excellent feel for atmosphere -- maybe your grammar and your tenses need a little review to make the reading easier.

Keep on writing!

AnonymousAnonymousover 16 years ago
Blah

Wasn't too fond of the hair descriptions.

Familyluv2114uFamilyluv2114uover 5 years ago
Great

Loved it! Please continue with more stories,you have a talent and I would love to read more from you,plus I Love your pic,such a beauty 👌🏾

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