by MohanSingh
The dialogue appeared to be a bit stilted and too formal. This may have been a cultural or a language issue, I guess, but it was difficult for me to imagine two people really talking that way. Nice story.
Boo fukn hoo!!!!!
You're just another pathetic ass hole
Using a place like this for shit comments!!!
Rather take a piece of cardboard and go stand in a street
5* nice kismet storie very good read
Coconut and all!!!!!!
Thank you MohanSingh
This will be the last story of my collection.
I just want to thank every person that has read and rated my stories. Also I would like to thank everyone that took time out to give me positive feedback.
I would encourage anyone thinking of writing to just do it. You do not have to be a professional and you will get better.
This story is so charming, funny and sweet. This is an amazing piece.
I have loved reading this story over and over. It is so sweet and romantic. I love these characters and I was so happy they were together in the end.