by britneyfan
Damn! Lighten up everybody! This was just what it was, a fun story of debauchery and an incestrous love fest. Who wouldn't have liked to join in? A Prude perhaps. It's just a sexy fun story.
I enjoyed it fully. I think his girlfriend was a bit mischievous and kinky...I'd love a gal like her!
This GF would have been dropped faster than she can say hi. And I would make public the fact that the mother got involved with her. Uncles, aunts, nephews, possibly grandparents would find out what happened! I would have taken photos with a cell phone and that would have been it!
"besotted" couldn't say how many decades it's been since i seen rhat verb employed. Bully, author
This was a phenomenal idea for a kinky story-line, but you didn’t carry the main theme of mother pegging son far enough. You seemed to get sidetracked into writing about distasteful father-son incestuous homosexual activity. If you would have elaborated on your initial theme of mother dominating and owning her own son the story would have been much more erotic.
Oh Goddess, yes, yes, yes,
this is really a story i love...! Being an utter incestuous sissy myself i of course would have preferred if Carl would have been put into Mommy's lingerie as well ... but yes again: this is really a story that makes my own sissy clit tickling ... compelling me to jill myself to it...!
Hot premise, terrible execution. Get an editor, just ask a friend to proofread dialogue and tell you if it feels natural. Because the character writing in this makes video porn plotlines from brazzers seem believable.
Next chapter would be fun if you had the guys getting into some crossdressing play. That would be a great addition to all the fun !
Was easily 5-stars, then you *had* to fuck it up with Dad coming home... 🙄🤦♀️
Seriously, it rained out golf, but nobody in the house looked outside?1
A clear case of finding the zone, then totally blowing it by trying to do too much... 5* and an easy favourite down to just 3* ...
started out good but too carried away. do like Carl and Jenny living in the same house
My mom walked in on a buddy screwing me when I went home at Christmas break. She never told my Dad or sisters, figuring it was just a phase for me, it was :) That summer in a long, round about, rambling conversation with me, she spilled the beans about observing us. She asked many Q's and even mentioned watching out if someone was coming home unexpectedly that break. One understanding mom.
Kinky hot dirty story ! Loved it.
Couldn't keep my hand off my cock the entire time.
Loved the story but to make it more realistic please mention lube. Too force a dildo/strapon/cock into a dry arse is almost impossible because of the pain caused. I love my wife to fuck my brains out but could never do it without lots of lube.
The two are completely different, and only those who haven't engaged in either/both don't understand that.
Pegging is the giving of control over to the woman you love, having her be the penetrator and controller of pleasure.
Gay sex is the attraction made physical of two (or more) males, usually but not always involving PIA sexual contact.
My wife and I enjoy pegging as an addition to our regular sex-play - but I have no desire to add a male to our interactions - and my wife doesn't share me with anyone (nor would I want to share her with anyone).
Although girlfriend has suggested pegging Ive always been put off by the videos online and these sort of stories on Lit which always start off about anal play and then always move over onto Gay sex as if its all tied together. Always puts me off the subject
Never have I lost an erection so fast when you added in the gay stuff.
It would be wonderful to have a family like this. It was fun reading the story, must admit I came more than once! I'd die a happy man.
i fucked my mom for years but damn i wish my dad would have been fucking me at the same time i know my wife would have loved watching
I loved when the dad showed up and things got even more kinky! When the girlfriend ordered her boyfriend to give his own dad a blowjob! That was really really hot!
where do these people live? i am buying the house next door and telling them i am a long lost relative. shoot i will buy all the houses on the block if i have too.
Jesus! Lost for words. Perfect. Wouldn't change a thing. Though I could have done with more ass to mouth... Well done!
Excellent story, loads of sexy kinky fun. Makes me wish I was a relative and could join such a sexy family. I would love to read more and maybe the guys could get into some sexy lingerie too when they get pegged and fuck each other
You had me up till that point, but I can definitely say, with utter sincerity, that the gay shit is absolutely the exact point where I lost interest in the story.
I loved this story! wonderfully written, and great kinky characters. Loved it when the girlfriend suduces the mom, son AND dad...they all had so much kinky fun because of her.
Best story I've read on Literotica! would love to read a sequel!
I was playing with my cock then entire time and cummed so many times like ooooh god this is perfect
I have to admit I loved this story from beginning to end and I couldnt keep my hands off my cock for one second , I've read and wanked off a number of times to this sexy story and as soon as I'm done writing this comment I'm going to wank again , would love to see more strapon stories from you 😋😋😋
I actually got a little sad when the father found them. It was a wonderful sexy kinky love triangle and he went and ruined what could have been a wonderful secret for the future. Also I had hopes Carl would end up in some bondage maybe his hands tied and gagged. Still the story was good. Good job.
i found this story wonderful, a little predictable, but all around good
I love almost anything with a strong taboo element, and this is just a great combination of so many.
I wish there were more stories in the incest section revolving around mothers penetrating their sons with strap-ons. It's such a hot fantasy, and this story is particularly hot.
Just like my wife & our 2 sons. Then theres me tagging along behind them bringing up the rear... Great story... keep it cum-ing!
fantastic story, almost felt like i was there as the father fucking his boy
This was absolutely the best and kinkiest story I have ever read! the dirtiest and hottest! I wish that I could've watched this or had been a part of this. I want to find a girlfriend like this! This story was absolutely amazing!
This was the hottest, dirtiest story I have ever read.
It pushed all my dirty, naughty buttons and described everything that I fantasize about every day. I always think about being a mommy sissy and being mommy's gay fagboy and I want to be a sissy fag in front of my wife as well. I even fantasize about being dominated by my daughter. I want to be the family sissy in front of all the women in my life. All I can think about is being dressed in black panties, bra, garters, stockings and high heels and being made to show my mommy, wife and daughter what a cocksucking fag I am inside.
It was so incredible to read your story and to think about mommy's strap on making me into a sissy fag while my girlfriend/wife watches and controls what happens. The furthest I've gotten is having my wife finger my sissy pussy and teasing me about wearing mommy's panties and bras. She knows what to say that always makes me come. When she says "come for mommy with mommy's fingers in your sissy pussy" it makes me come. She also makes me say "I'm a cocksucker and cunt for mommy" and this makes me come also. I just can't say enough about your story. know I will read it again and again, dreaming about my wife and mommy fucking me together like a sissy fag. Thank you, thank you, thank you . . .
I sooooo want to meet these women...
And I've been getting so tired of stories where guys are open to every possible experience - except even touching each other.
Loved it, Must see more!
omg that was amazing, i wish i had a hot family and a g/f like that, i would happily play out all of that, just wow!
How true to life. When Steve and Chris get together, Izzy and I often have a similar foursome. I just love being on the bottom whilst Izzy is hammering away at Steve's arse with the strap-on. Warm muggy we found to be the best, don't ask me why but with all the squirming and slithering these sessions seem to go on for hours.
A bit too long for my taste but no doubt a very good story. The ideas in it are brilliant.I still think it would benefit from some word economy making the story more concise and incisive.
HOT HOT HOT...Great fucking story..The only way I would haved liked it more is if the girlfriend had caught hin playing dress-up and her and Mum had transformed him into a pure slut to fuck wow and then Dad could have had 3 sluts to fuck and get fucked by.. My mom caught me dressed when I was 23 and altho it didnt turn into a fuckfest like this story did It did make for some very happy night spent at home together..sally_spandex69 at yahoo dot com
so hottttttt...should be rated "200"...tell us more about this incredible "family"...for women/moms like myself...your story/scenerios were..and are..tremendous turn-ons...nothing hotter for us than total dad/son bi action with us participating...and your inclusion of dom/sub action with strap-on and "real" was hottttt and terrific..ignore the idiot..with the comment.. who said your story was a waste..it was one of the very best on this site in months...so please....continue it....
...WASTED!<BR><BR>Leave writing to WRITERS in the future!