by NaSchmi
Well seeing as English isn't, your first language I can say you have done a wonderful job, proof read perfectly. I also agree with anon this is crying out for continuation, especially as it appears to be set at the beginning of lockdown, you now have another 8 weeks to use your imagination and creativity. Hope to be able to make further comments on your writing in due course. TYVM
Would love to see where things go between those characters. Please do a sequel.
Luckily I can read German, so I will have a look at your other stories too, but since my favorite foreign language is English, I fully second the call for a sequel. I Love your story, I wish that what happened to Alexander would happen to me !
More of this please - this is one of the best stories I have on lit E in many years.
Great story! I would have loved to belong to Mistress Samantha. And for her to surprise me with what she has hidden in her drawer!
While your brilliant story slowly unfolds, you drag your readers - male and female carefully along with your thoughts and fantasies and the more intense it gets, the more a male like me falls victim to your spell. You obviously know the feelings of both sides, but the wording you chose seems to give away your true emotions. But that might be a very personal imagination, inspired by the convincing opening, calling for continuation.