All Comments on 'Strawberries'

by NaSchmi

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AnonymousAnonymousalmost 4 years ago

Good story!!! You should do a sequel!!!!!!!!

AnonymousAnonymousalmost 4 years ago

Do a sequel!

Deejay121Deejay121almost 4 years ago
Yes a great story

Well seeing as English isn't, your first language I can say you have done a wonderful job, proof read perfectly. I also agree with anon this is crying out for continuation, especially as it appears to be set at the beginning of lockdown, you now have another 8 weeks to use your imagination and creativity. Hope to be able to make further comments on your writing in due course. TYVM

UnrighteousUnrighteousalmost 4 years ago

Very sweet, thanks for sharing this story. Loved the introduction.

AnonymousAnonymousalmost 4 years ago

Would love to see where things go between those characters. Please do a sequel.

peterdebruijn02peterdebruijn02almost 4 years ago
Deserves a sequel

Luckily I can read German, so I will have a look at your other stories too, but since my favorite foreign language is English, I fully second the call for a sequel. I Love your story, I wish that what happened to Alexander would happen to me !

AnonymousAnonymousabout 2 years ago

More of this please - this is one of the best stories I have on lit E in many years.

AnonymousAnonymousalmost 2 years ago

Great story! I would have loved to belong to Mistress Samantha. And for her to surprise me with what she has hidden in her drawer!

literaturboxliteraturboxabout 1 year ago

While your brilliant story slowly unfolds, you drag your readers - male and female carefully along with your thoughts and fantasies and the more intense it gets, the more a male like me falls victim to your spell. You obviously know the feelings of both sides, but the wording you chose seems to give away your true emotions. But that might be a very personal imagination, inspired by the convincing opening, calling for continuation.

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