All Comments on 'Strawter Family does Incest Porn'

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AnonymousAnonymousover 6 years ago
Ending...

is such a tease, and this is an awesome story! I want more chapters!

LefreakLefreakover 6 years ago
Excellent

This story can't end here... So you have work to do.

amachiamachiover 6 years ago
Fucking great!

I gotta say, you're getting even better and better at this!

And of course we want more!

AnonymousAnonymousover 6 years ago
More

You need to add a lot more to this story

AnonymousAnonymousover 6 years ago

I like this concept but i have problem with Martin's parents because they seems to care more about money than there own son.

AnonymousAnonymousover 6 years ago
MORE!!!!!!

There " should " be a lot more !!!! So when can we get more "???

AnonymousAnonymousover 6 years ago
IT is not ......

A DEBT card ... no idea if a Debt even exists. A DEBIT CARD is used for monetary exercises, such as deposits or withdrawals from a financial institution using an ATM machine. Other transaction can occur at an ATM. Debit cards at one time were referred to as ATM CARDS but are now called Debit Card.

ManoBlueManoBlueover 6 years ago
Meh

I would have enjoyed it more if the Son wasn't such a push over.

CoolBreez3CoolBreez3over 6 years ago
Excellent, looking forward to the next chapter

I think Christen needs to divorce the dad, and the story continue with the thee, and Lula.

AnonymousAnonymousover 6 years ago

Hope the son gets revenge.

EasyReader44EasyReader44over 6 years ago
Excellent story.

Please Continue with Many more chapters of This story.

amachiamachiover 6 years ago
Loved...

...how the mother fucked him good despite his denial!

AnonymousAnonymousover 6 years ago
awesome story

Please continue... And so what if its a debit card its a good story and needs to have more chapters. Good work loved it all. Please write more

MyDirtySecrethobbyMyDirtySecrethobbyover 6 years ago
Definitely must have more

Incredible story once again please let there be more many more

AnonymousAnonymousover 6 years ago
first time comment on literotica.

Pls continue with more chapters, it was an interesting story

soul71soul71over 6 years agoAuthor

Hello everyone,

I'm glad that you all enjoyed the story I'll see what I can come up with for a sequel.

soul71soul71over 6 years agoAuthor
part two

Ok, well you wanted it so ye shall have, in the process of working on a storyline for part two.

Daddy1995Daddy1995over 6 years ago

Man i love this plot line

AnonymousAnonymousover 6 years ago
Such a good story!

I love how in your stories sons who refuse their hot mothers get their commeuppance - tied and fucked by their moms!

AnonymousAnonymousover 6 years ago

Good story, how about some lingerie and high heels in part two?

AnonymousAnonymousover 6 years ago
Can't contain myself

Excellent story can't wait for part two liked to hear a little anal and maybe the mom tied up for some revenge from the son.

hyperlizardhyperlizardover 6 years ago

Great read pregnancy is another spin on it too

AnonymousAnonymousover 6 years ago

Martin ruined the whole story...

soul71soul71over 6 years agoAuthor

Sorry you feel that way I don't think he did.

AnonymousAnonymousover 6 years ago
Martin...

...was a great character to read. He's conflicted, has certain morals and it was most enjoyable reading about him getting fucked hard by his own mother in front of all those people.

AnonymousAnonymousover 6 years ago
I kept looking for the encounter with his sister.

More!

soul71soul71over 6 years agoAuthor
part 2

Part two is finished added a few of the things you all suggested now give it a read through then off to the editor.

soul71soul71over 6 years agoAuthor

Well just got part two back I'm give it a read through and it should be up here soon.

soul71soul71over 6 years agoAuthor

Part two has been submitted.

john1946john1946over 6 years ago
Great

That was fun. Looking forward to where this goes. Thanks

AnonymousAnonymousover 6 years ago
Loved it!

Thank you for this great story, I hope there will be more with family gangbang theme!

AnonymousAnonymousover 6 years ago
OMG

Man that was a great story. It didn't take all day on the set-up. Hope to see 2 or 3 more stories. Can't wait to read how he bust out his sister. Hope he impregnate her.

divergurldivergurlabout 6 years ago
Love it

So hot just fix the anatomy issues. A vagina is not endless or an ass. No woman can take a 9" dick in her vagina all the way. Which is why in open huge dicks always have some left outside. Pussy is like dick. A woman average is 4 to 5 inches when aroused while like rare 8 inch plus dicks some may go to 7 inches. That's when aroised less then 4 inches ehejn not. And his dick is super skinny if he is 9 inches and only 2.5 in girth which is way below average. Now he can get all the dick up their asses. Otherwise very hot but they went into it really fast and easy. Love the mothers dirty talk that is so hot want more of it.

max052max052about 6 years ago
An absolute riot!

This is everything I look for in a porn story. The sons reluctance was a little hard to believe but it still made for a good story. look forward to more.

5 stars, fave story, thanks for your effort.

max052

soul71soul71about 6 years agoAuthor

Thanks Max

AnonymousAnonymousabout 6 years ago
4

Get an editor that knows grammar and punctuation. Don't depend on your spell-checker. Martin was a petulant whiney-boy who needed a hard slap across the fsce from his mother!

soul71soul71about 6 years agoAuthor

You spelled face wrong.

Decal_lastDecal_lastabout 6 years ago
Outstanding!

Great start. Keep them cumming please.

soul71soul71about 6 years agoAuthor

You do know there are another 2 stories out already Decal?

AnonymousAnonymousalmost 5 years ago
Loved the story. However, your math sucks.

4 inches around is only a little over one inch across. 2 inches across is about 6 inches in girth.

An 11+ inch cock would do serious damage to a woman's womb, if fully inside her.

Christen's 'thin' lace gown was a millimeter thick? A mm is .039 inches. A tarp for covering a truck's load is about .030 inches.

Fuzzy_KbearFuzzy_Kbearover 3 years ago

Drugging and raping the boy for money....

Should be titled "Death of a family", but of course that's not sexy and it's not my story so good job?!?

AnonymousAnonymousover 2 years ago

‘Forced’ doesn’t cover it, needs a rape tag

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