by iloveall
Parts 1 2 and 3 were very nice, but however you have lost the entire plot in part 4. Sorry to say it, but you have spoilt a really nice story. Part 4 has given a whole new scenario compared to part 1 and 2.
Please conclude the story ,
What happened to Ali
What happened to Prateek and Arpita’s marriage
What happened to Roma’s love
In part 1 there's no mention of any phone calls, hotel and blasts, so how can part 4 say that Arprita called her husband from a hotel, then also in part 1 it's stated that Ali had brought her home late at night, but in part 4 you wrote that she had come home the next day in a taxi. I suggest that you read part 1 again before writing part 4.