All Comments on 'Stress and Success'

Not as in paddles, but as in characters. There is nothing about these characters that makes the reader take an interest in them or their actions. Work on character development, please! Their actions in your story would be a lot more satisfying if one knew what they thought and felt. Include the anticipation and how it affects both of them, mentally and emotionally, not just physically. She acts meek and he gets hard...and????

I like how this story is starting, I hope it continues to pick up speed....