by Clark84
Could use a bit of backstory but that’s fine a few spelling mistakes small things like using a instead of an but they stand out when made often all in all a nice beginning I’m hooked.
Fred
Clark84 here, I seem to have run out of ideas for a part two. If anyone was a suggestion please leave a comment below. If I do use your your idea, I will give you a shout-out in the next installment.