All Comments on 'Strife Academy Pt. 01'

by Clark84

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2027fred2027fredabout 6 years ago
Good start

Could use a bit of backstory but that’s fine a few spelling mistakes small things like using a instead of an but they stand out when made often all in all a nice beginning I’m hooked.

Fred

Clark84Clark84almost 6 years agoAuthor
Help me!

Clark84 here, I seem to have run out of ideas for a part two. If anyone was a suggestion please leave a comment below. If I do use your your idea, I will give you a shout-out in the next installment.

Malkav907Malkav907over 5 years ago
How bout...

...a friendly "congratulations" from Alisha?

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