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by EllenMelville

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AlwaystabooAlwaystabooover 5 years ago
Very fun read

Women uninhabitedly loving their bodies is the most senual thing possible.

AnonymousAnonymousover 5 years ago
The story meanders.

You wrote it in a few different directions and did not complete a segment except for the game itself.

EllenMelvilleEllenMelvilleover 5 years agoAuthor
Thanks for the comments!

Both of you are right. I started writing with the idea that this would be a first chapter, but, as you know, I have started quite a few longer pieces and decided to drop them. And so, I opened a few doors here that remained open at end. Very valid observation.

TLMorganTLMorganover 5 years ago

Very unique idea. I'm interested in reading more.

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