All Comments on 'Strip Poke-her'

Great story, written so I wasn't able to stop reading. Loved the pace and your sexcellent description.

I've always enjoyed the fantasy of non consent. In reality I'm quiet the opposite, but it is a great fantasy.

Thank you for your time and effort, it's appreciated.

But a little contrived. Your descriptions of the events are great, but I would like to suggest a little more character developement for the antagonist. The girl hates him, but it might be helpful to describe him or his actions in such a way to make the reader hate him, too!

A little more scene description would help the reader understand the setting of the dorm room, too. Most dorm rooms arent very large, and the idea of enough room for a bed, desk, poker table, and free floor space for "coupling" might need to be better described to make it more realistic...

Keep writing, I would happily read another of your stories!!!

Great conflicting emotions from the main character between being humiliated and actually enjoying it.

I want to be that girl

Loved it.