All Comments on 'Strong Safety Ch. 01'

Great Start, looking forward to the rest of the story.

It's obvious the author is a college football fan. Those parts were so detailed and on the money. Loved it.

Well written, entertaining start to this story. Hate where this chapter ended. Hope the next chapter is out soon.

Some glaring technical errors that are disappointing for an author with the obvious talent this one has. The one that sticks out most was using through rather than threw.

Great story. I enjoyed the other stories you wrote and this one slid just right. Your story was enjoyable and easy to read. 5stars

Glad I read the previous storie. Looking forward to more

Great start. Smooth flowing narrative and character development. 5.0*

Really....Liam seems like another desperate wimp hooked on someone's woman!!

Wimpy weak Liam.....runs in the famoly

Where are the first two stories in this saga?

Atishtum, the first two stories were about Liam’s mother and father, I think the author took them down, possibly to publish them, or perhaps to rewrite something he didn’t like. KS

Correction Atishtum, the stories are held be better off, and lullaby KS

@anon, the two first stories are published on author's story page, "I'd be Better Off" and "Lullaby".

Nice Intro.