by MechaBlade
Unique prose. I think it is unusual for Literotica writers to be so poetic. Well done.
I enjoyed this story. It made me shift in my seat and adjust my nipples for my reading pleasure. Job well done.
Don't worry about the comments, Mecha -- I don't think they have even a basic grasp of the material they're looking at.
so, why do we care anymore about Eros since you've misrepresented the God of Love as such a slimeball? you've portrayed him more as selfish Hades or Herakles than Eros. very unsatisfying, weak finish.
Do you understand basic female anatomy? You might want to brush up. The penis does not enter the womb. Ever.
But I agree, I thought cupid's arrow bought love, and he didn't even give the girl the lust to enjoy the rape...
Though I did enjoy the language you used. Very flowery.
Just a horny guy and a raped girl who only feels revolted by her rapist. The is only lust not love, which I thought the arrows would have provided.
Having raped the girl, he will depart very smugly and pleased with himself and the girl will drag herself home to very unhappy parents who would disown her. She will soon be residing with Pluto in the Underworld and Cupdi will go on his raping way.