by charlieflemming
u gotta make it longer way to short no incest or anything like come on y is everyone now makeing short stories it was good bt way way way to short
Hadn't previously realized that you dictate your story and assume/hope/trust that the grammar is correct. Not so Charlie.
Despite this, I can follow your stories, faithfully, so long as the are short. Unlike some readers, I prefer the shorter submissions. Requires less of my concentration time. Guess that'she what happens at 75.
Great preamale to what will, undoubtedly, be another very follow-able series. Five ( 5 ) .
I'm very glad you're writing new stories, but it was short and needs more detail. Details of the womens' appearances always help.
This needs a part 2 the story has an open end and needs to be completed plus there is many things that can happen between mom and elaine and sister and son
load of crap 11 inc why is it every story on here everyone has a 10 /11 /12 cock live in the real world
You do know not even porn stars have 11 inch cocks. The standard size in porn is seven. So a huge dick is 7 inches but you think it makes sense to make an 11 inch dick? Also you didn’t bother to edit a damn thing.
11 inches fine, whatever, it's the 3.5" thick part that's just ludicrous. 11 inches long by 3.5 inches thick is a volume of about 1.7 liters, which is the same displacement as the engine in a Honda Civic. You want to know what that would look like? Go to a grocery store, find a 26 ounce container of Morton's Salt. Now find another one. Stack them on top of each other, and you're in the right ballpark.
Yet again another bs story with nothing to do with insect. Wish they had negative stars to give.
Like I said before, get an editor and use a better word processor. And yes a little realism would help also. This should go under fantasy.
So quarantine was the spring of 2019 now? If you are writing about something that really hapoened, it might be good to get the year correct. Especially if it is as recent as this.