by gregscott
Wow, what a great story. I would love to say write another chapter but that might discourage me from imagining the wonderful life they have ahead of them. Stories usually don't get me emotional (horny yes ), The ending was beautiful.
What a way to lose your virginity, the sex was so hot, and then you had to go and make it all sappy at the end.
It was a good read thank you.
You worked on and edited this pile of crap for a year, and this is what you ended up with? Throw in the towel, mate.
That previous version that you deleted was the first story I read on this site. I will never forget that story. Great work!