by OldKingClancy
I just started reading this series today and I couldn’t put it down. It was so amazing to read! I loved every bit of it. I just wish there was more to read for Art and Nicola!!
Why does every sentence in the dialog have to have "fuck" in it. I'm certainly of a dilfferent generation from these people, but I don't know anyone who speaks like this, either men or women. The grammar is terrible (learn how to use pronouns, dummy) and after the accident this was a long tedious trip through rehab and prosthetic use. I gave it a 3*, but that might have been generous.
Thanks for living up to your name again, dummy. I'll take the criticism of the swearing which is the only thing you can argue. As I said at the start it would be a while before any sexual elements came into the story because as it turns out, learning to walk again takes a long fucking time. As for the pronouns, as far as I'm aware I see no issue but if you're gonna criticise a free-to-read site then you've got bigger problems.
But consider:
If the only prayer you ever say in your entire life is thank you, it will be enough. Meister Eckhart von Hochheim (1260-1328)
All in all, I enjoyed the entire series, but I, too, think that all the using of the F*** & C*** words was a bit much, especially coming from a girl. Where I'm from, calling someone a c*** is about the worst insult there is. (I'm American, so maybe I don't understand Scottish/English slang.)
Had to really concentrate to keep all the characters straight, much less the jumping around with the time frames of all the sequences.
Note for future readers: Start reading with the "Death & Love" Series and read all the KingClancy stories in chronological order. It made more sense to me when I read all the stories.