by OldKingClancy
All in all, I enjoyed the entire series, but I, too, think that all the using of the F*** & C*** words was a bit much, especially coming from a girl. Where I'm from, calling someone a c*** is about the worst insult there is. (I'm American, so maybe I don't understand Scottish/English slang.)
Had to really concentrate to keep all the characters straight, much less the jumping around with the time frames of all the sequences.
Note for future readers: Start reading with the "Death & Love" Series and read all the KingClancy stories in chronological order. It made more sense to me when I read all the stories.
But consider:
If the only prayer you ever say in your entire life is thank you, it will be enough. Meister Eckhart von Hochheim (1260-1328)
Thanks for living up to your name again, dummy. I'll take the criticism of the swearing which is the only thing you can argue. As I said at the start it would be a while before any sexual elements came into the story because as it turns out, learning to walk again takes a long fucking time. As for the pronouns, as far as I'm aware I see no issue but if you're gonna criticise a free-to-read site then you've got bigger problems.
Why does every sentence in the dialog have to have "fuck" in it. I'm certainly of a dilfferent generation from these people, but I don't know anyone who speaks like this, either men or women. The grammar is terrible (learn how to use pronouns, dummy) and after the accident this was a long tedious trip through rehab and prosthetic use. I gave it a 3*, but that might have been generous.
I just started reading this series today and I couldn’t put it down. It was so amazing to read! I loved every bit of it. I just wish there was more to read for Art and Nicola!!