by AnnasFriend
Wonderful. Keep writing. Get the whole school involved. LOL
You've found the perfect balance between story and smut. I'm enjoying reading as it unfolds and slightly envious of your writing ability!
Great story. Beautifully written. I hope you keep writing and can’t wait for future chapters.
You keep on keeping me pleased with your writing. Keep up with this.
Loving it. This chapter was an improvement over the first chapter all over, well done.
Just keeps getting better and hotter
2, teenage cunts to fuck and now a 3some. Hope you add the daughter in soon
Such a well written story with great dialogue. Also very well proofread.
What a great description of the difference between reticent, hesitant Liz and the more forward and agressive Maggie.
The gentle, step-by-step cautious steps he took with the somewhat scared, yet wanting, Liz were masterfully portrayed. The gentle, loving atmosphere is part of what makes this story so great.
Do these girls have a virgin friend or cousin who comes to their city for a visit, whom they know needs the help of an experienced, older man so that she can have a memorable first time before she goes back home? A virgin with anxieties like this, is going to want her friend there for her first time, for encouragement and moral support.
An alternative (or addition) would be a friend, who because of previous bad experiences, is now completely turned off or indifferent to sex.
Second 5 star chapter.
Paul in Oklahoma
This chapter was a bit harder for me to read than the first, but these girls' through-the-roof horniness pulls it through. I'm enjoying myself and I look forward to chapter 3! Thanks for sharing <3
Just wonderful.
Agree with my previous comment.
⭐🌟🌟🌟🌟🌟
Paul in Oklahoma
Wow !! Keep the story going. It’s getting good. I immediately read part 2 after finishing part 2 and am about to go to part 3. Love the contrast of Maggie and Liz. Looks and their demeanor. I’m a fan
Great story! Compassion, patience, nothing sleazy or forceful. Done the way all virgins should be introduced to sex, slowly and with patience and kindness. Its a bit scary for all of us and awkward. We men would benefit from a patient older woman our first time. Might help us understand that its better when angst is not so much a part of it!
Another cracking chapter of brilliant writing. Loving this series as much as all your others.
Most excellent. A very nice study in how to introduce a shy young woman to the world of intimacy. Plus hot as hell.
I especially liked the part where he got Liz pregnant. She was a virgin, and certainly not on the pill…
Another well-thought-out-and-written chapter; Liz just needed someone to be patient with her and show her how to take her time, enjoying each step of the trip!
Maggie is funny...she also is empathetic and encouraging...just what is needed by the others...I just wanna know what she and CHARLIE are cooking up...??!!
Five(**5**) Stars...🌠🌠🌠🌠🌠
Damn, you’re a good writer for me it’s a perfect erotica down with proper character, description and depth, so well done him, helping the fragile girl to enjoy sex again, or except to even, the way he did it was something only usually an older man could do, and even then most wouldn’t have the patience. But very realistic. If someone was that fragile, they wouldn’t just automatically jump into bed with the guy because they fancy him and fuck him. So very well done. You actually sound like a bit of a psychologist to be honest, I hope that hasn’t made your head swell , but please keep writing if you stopped,start again .I’m gonna read everything of yours. I’ve only found one story that I was disappointed in so far which I did comment on the one about parental control. Apart from that I’ve really admired all the other writing. 🤩👍🤞😉