by LustyMadame
"about principals of biology" And who were those principals.
Or did you mean "principles".
Not the first time I have seen this error on the board.
I gave it five stars...no need to let a little grammar get in the way of a realistic, hot story. Hope you continue writing.
but too many errors, far too much narrative, and the little dialogue utilized was for the most part unrealistic.
Arguably, this story should have been in "Romance".
Regardless, I liked the story. There might (maybe) be the potential for a continuing series, with this tale.
Your story was very well done, and simply a joy to read. Very nice.
... If that was ment to be realistic then I am a cartoon character. Mind you it was an enjoyable story with good details and i'll probably read it again. I just don't think it was very realistic.
hot but highly unrealistic
that guy had a hardon and came 3times in a row superficial libido
also the girl is elastic girl felt no pain in anal superficial asshole
he was able to take all 3 holes ans she let him do so easily
too good to true even in stories