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by LustyMadame

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AnonymousAnonymousover 12 years ago
Grammar!

"about principals of biology" And who were those principals.

Or did you mean "principles".

Not the first time I have seen this error on the board.

SharpguySharpguyover 12 years ago
Well Done

I gave it five stars...no need to let a little grammar get in the way of a realistic, hot story. Hope you continue writing.

AnonymousAnonymousover 12 years ago
Shows promise

but too many errors, far too much narrative, and the little dialogue utilized was for the most part unrealistic.

LoneStarRiderLoneStarRiderover 12 years ago
Nice.

Arguably, this story should have been in "Romance".

Regardless, I liked the story. There might (maybe) be the potential for a continuing series, with this tale.

AnonymousAnonymousover 12 years ago
More...

Awesome story and totally hot. How about a sequel?

AnonymousAnonymousabout 11 years ago
A joy to read

Your story was very well done, and simply a joy to read. Very nice.

AnonymousAnonymousalmost 11 years ago
Good but...

... If that was ment to be realistic then I am a cartoon character. Mind you it was an enjoyable story with good details and i'll probably read it again. I just don't think it was very realistic.

AnonymousAnonymousover 2 years ago

hot but highly unrealistic

that guy had a hardon and came 3times in a row superficial libido

also the girl is elastic girl felt no pain in anal superficial asshole

he was able to take all 3 holes ans she let him do so easily

too good to true even in stories

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