by LustyMadame
hot but highly unrealistic
that guy had a hardon and came 3times in a row superficial libido
also the girl is elastic girl felt no pain in anal superficial asshole
he was able to take all 3 holes ans she let him do so easily
too good to true even in stories
... If that was ment to be realistic then I am a cartoon character. Mind you it was an enjoyable story with good details and i'll probably read it again. I just don't think it was very realistic.
Your story was very well done, and simply a joy to read. Very nice.
Arguably, this story should have been in "Romance".
Regardless, I liked the story. There might (maybe) be the potential for a continuing series, with this tale.
but too many errors, far too much narrative, and the little dialogue utilized was for the most part unrealistic.
I gave it five stars...no need to let a little grammar get in the way of a realistic, hot story. Hope you continue writing.
"about principals of biology" And who were those principals.
Or did you mean "principles".
Not the first time I have seen this error on the board.