All Comments on 'Student Teacher Ch. 02'

Sensual feelings that come out of the deep, a married woman cheated upon and a younger girl nearly engaged. Just the right recipe for this story.

searching4soul the second chapter was better you showed more feeling and love with sara will you be writing another chapter with jan and sara showing there feelings and maybe moving in together or find a one story home where they dont have to climb those stairs.how did the divorce go did the cheating hubby get the book thrown at him .

Pat.

Atlanta,Ga

I love this story, it is at the right speed and so touching to the heart, I hope you can keep it in the happy mood or mode.

ore

A truly touching story and so believable,

Ill dream of being Sara tonight,

errors........syntax and spelling. Despite a workable plotline, unfortunately, I didn't find the story very believable at all, the conversation artificial and stilted. You have to get a lot more real than this, if you want to succeed. But, there's definite potential. Keep working at it.

so endearing... lovely ending to a beautiful story.