All Comments on 'Study Break Ch. 03'

I like this and there is a lot of potential for development - good job

It was way too short and abrupt. Now keep this story going to make up for the short chapter. I still gave it a 5, but only because of the previous chapters.

that was supposed to be the end? it was more like a chapter outline of what you want not a chapter to further the story to an end.

I liked the story even though the characters are not my cup of tea. I have a particular aversion to tattoo's on women, something about spoiling such lovely skin, so liking Vicky as a character is difficult. However, the two seem to be a good match and life goes on. There certainly is opportunity for a continuation of the story line and I suspect Vicky's parents are not too pleased with her choices in life thus far, so that could be interesting as well.